* Use
short sentences - keeps the pace moving
* Use
short first paragraphs - keeps the reader turning the page
* Use
vigorous English - makes the stories live by infusing them with passion
* Be
positive - telling people what is rather than what is not ie instead of saying
that something is ‘inexpensive’ say it’s ‘economical’.
My four (not that I am comparing myself to
the great man!) would be:
* Do not write for yourself,
always write for the reader.
* Be disciplined - you may
wish to pack lots of information in but does the reader need it?
* You may not have put enough
information in - you can imagine where a scene is set but have you given the
reader the information they need? You may have drawn a character but can your
readers see them?
* Be brutal - if you have
overwritten, chop out the fat.
The question is ‘what
would your four top tips be?’
I have started a
discussion at www.facebook.com/inscribemedia
John Dean
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