Friday, 27 February 2015

Not that I want to argue with you


Writing arguments is an important part of fiction but creating them is a deft art. Here are some thoughts:


They shouldn’t have repetitive elements. Unlike real arguments, which go in circles for ages

 

They shouldn’t be boring. Written arguments are there to forward the plot along. They should reveal something about a relationship between two people or give the reader information about a problem

 

There should be some sort of immediate outcome from the argument, unlike in real life

 

Remember how rules of conversation work

* A lot of the time, we do not speak in correct sentences/we often use short sharp phrases.

* Keep your dialogue crisp - we can tell a lot about a person in a short snap of conversation.

* We interrupt a lot.

* We assume a lot. Not Your brother has been murdered.

What, my brother Brian?

Yes, thats him. Your only brother. The younger one. With the red hair

Keep it realistic.

* Dialogue must take the story on. Only write small talk if you need to, ie showing how tedious a person can be. If you dont need it, dont write it. Make sure each word does a job.

* Do not pack dialogue with extraneous information

 

 

John Dean

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