We had an entry into the Global Short Story Competition over the weekend that started with a terrific opening line, one that grabs the reader and says ‘hey, you gotta find out what happens next.’
Won’t reveal what it was as the competition has not closed yet but it got me thinking about the importance of the first line in short stories, indeed in any fiction. A busy and harassed judge/editor/agent reads so much that anything that makes them notice you has got to be good. Look at these examples, which came in the top 100 of a recent poll of all-time great openings.
* Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice. —Gabriel García Márquez, One Hundred Years of Solitude
* It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. —George Orwell, 1984
* It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. —Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities
* I am an invisible man. —Ralph Ellison, Invisible Man
* Someone must have slandered Josef K., for one morning, without having done anything truly wrong, he was arrested. —Franz Kafka, The Trial
* If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you'll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don't feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth. —J. D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye
Each one draws you into the story right from the off. Do that and you have given yourself a great chance of success, assuming your story lives up to the promise of the opening lines, of course!
Still time to enter the September competition (still a low entry) at www.inscribemedia.co.uk
John Dean
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